FINISHED AFTER LONG LAST!!! AHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAA!

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I DID IT! FINISHED! CRISPED TO PERFECTION! AT LAST! AHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA :iconcrazylaughplz:

My novel! My opus! "Elijah the Healer" is finally finished as finished as it could be (written wise ;) still gotta do some illustrations someday....but anywho...)

Things that have changed or have been improved in the story....

1.) Generally everything, including dialogue, narration, grammar, ect...

2.) Interactions between the characters...
    ~More character development between Cari and Elijah
    ~How Hector interacts with Cari.
    ~And more!

3.) General character development...
    ~Improving (so-to-speak) Hector's part.
    ~Deepening Benjamin's personal dilemmas (PTSD and more).
   
4.) Scene enhancing...
    ~Scenes in Elm Brook taken into greater detail
    ~More "ahem" with Cari's dream sequence >//////>
    ~And yes, I even improved the last many chapters and upped the angst and feels in all! :icondignitylaughplz:

Anyway, that's just a generalized idea of what has been changed and improved ;) I hope you all enjoy "Elijah the Healer!" and let me know what you think of the final version! :iconthumbsupplz:

Go here to read from the beginning ---> Elijah The Healer... Prologue by Chrissyissypoo19

Love Chrissy
© 2014 - 2024 Chrissyissypoo19
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SereneDash's avatar
woot woot!! XD