The Unknown Martyr (character sketches) 1

So here's my first character sketch of my two darlings from my new short story, "The Unknown Martyr." I am writing the story for my English professor who wants me to enter it into a contest. Once I am done writing it, I shall be adding pictures

So here's a little scene from Chapter 1 where Amichai finds Benjamin crying over the death of his father and being alone at the Dachau concentration camp. (underneath is just some notes I was taking for the story)

I really like the genuineness of Amichai's character. How anyone can manage a smile at that place and still have the strength to comfort a child takes a lot of morale.

If you have no idea what I'm talking about, please go read my short story. It's still a work in progress, but I have chapters 1-4 in my gallery.

(And yes this is on notebook paper...hence i did this and the other ones during class...don't judge. )